英 语
本试卷分第Ⅰ卷（选择题）和第Ⅱ卷（非选择题）两部分。第Ⅰ卷1至9页。第Ⅱ卷10至12页。共150分。考试时间120分钟。考试结束时，将本试卷和答题卡一并收回。
第Ⅰ卷（选择题 共90分）
注意事项：
1. 答题前，考生务必认真核对条形码上的姓名、报名号和座位号，无误后将本人的姓名、报名号和座位号填写在答题卡上的相应位置。同时将答题卡背面左上角的座位号涂黑。
2. 每小题选出答案后，用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其它答案。不能答在试题卷上。
第一部分 英语知识运用（共两节，满分40分）
第一节 单项填空（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
从A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
1. ―People should stop using their cars and start using public transport. ―______. The roads are too crowded as it is. A. All right A. this
B. Exactly B. that
C. Go ahead C. it
D. Fine D. one
D. Having dressed
2. We have made ______ clear that we are strongly against smoking in the office. 3. ______ in a white uniform, he looks more like a cook than a doctor.
A. Dressed
B. To dress
C. Dressing
4. ―Do you know where David is? I couldn’t find him anywhere. ―Well. He ______ have gone far — his coat’s still here. A. needn’t A. which
B. can’t B. when B. it rained
C. mustn’t C. where
D. wouldn’t D. that D. it has rained
5. I walked in our garden, ______ Tom and Jim were tying a big sign onto one of the trees. 6. So hard ______ that we had to wait another day.
A. did it rain
C. has it rained
7. ______ to her school from the town of Harlan, I followed a road winding around the mountain.
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A. Getting B. Get C. To get D. Got
8. ―I am really struck by your spoken English. You speak so fluently. Have you been abroad? ―Yes. I ______ in London for two years. A. have stayed
B. stayed
C. had stayed
D. have been staying
9. ―When will the visa be ready, sir?
―______ everything goes well, you will get it in 14 workdays. A. Although accept it.
A. how
B. why
C. that
D. whether
第二节 完形填空（共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后所给各题的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
My mother always says that I’m born to dance ballet. But that September when I was in a ballet class and went to do a turn, something just happened. I heard it and I surely 11 it. I went right to a doctor and got an X-ray examination, which 12 a lot of damage to my knee — a(n) 13 injury for a dancer. I had to have a(n) 14 . Everything had been going so well and now I had this huge injury. Dance was my life, but 15 , I wasn’t going to be able to do it for a year or 16 never again.
My dad was really a big inspiration for me. He was 17 a battle against cancer at that time. He showed me how to make it through a 18 situation. I thought that if he could do that, I could handle this, too. 19 my operation, I had great difficulty walking, but I knew that if I really worked hard, my injury would heal.
Several months later, I definitely wasn’t at my strongest, but I could 20 a class. The dancing I did was 21 at first — moves that my knee could handle.
Once we started practicing in the fall, I was beginning to feel like myself 22 . One day, I 23 the schedule and my name was next to Eliot Feld. I thought it must be a(n) 24 because he is very famous in the ballet world. But it wasn’t. He 25 me and taught me a lot of things. At l8, I had a solo performance! It was a big 26 . I was so excited and felt like a real ballerina. After the 27 , Eliot said, “You know, you have a(n) 28 — and you are also made of steel.” That, coming from him, was the 29 compliment (赞美) I have ever received. I’d like to think that 30 my injury made me strong. 11. A. touched 12. A. pointed 13. A. necessary 14. A. holiday
B. As far as C. Unless D. As long as
10. I have received an offer from a German university, but I’m still hesitating ______ I should
B. accepted B. said B. deadly B. cry
C. broke C. read C. practical
D. felt D. showed D. important D. test
C. operation
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15. A. in time 16. A. possibly 17. A. leading 19. A. After 21. A. basic 23. A. stole 25. A. held
B. all of a sudden C. at present B. luckily B. fighting B. difficult B. During B. take up B. quick B. then
C. surprisingly C. losing C. positive C. At
D. once in a while D. hardly D. inventing D. heavy D. Over D. get through D. hard D. too D. checked D. task D. received D. position D. match D. exercise D. smartest D. turning to
18. A. wonderful 20. A. set out 22. A. before 24. A. mistake 26. A. surprise 27. A. speech 28. A. gift
29. A. simplest
C. break into C. formal C. again C. faced C. problem C. success C. luck C. greatest
B. borrowed B. opportunity B. obeyed B. secret B. chance B. deepest
C. encouraged C. competition
B. performance
30. A. dealing with B. letting out C. setting up
第二部分 阅读理解 （共两节，满分50分）
第一节 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。（共20小题；每小题2分，满分40分）
A
Galaxy saw a man and a woman who communicated with the sign language at the train station when she was on the way home one evening. She noticed that the woman asked the man for the direction. He told her that he did not know. Galaxy decided to help them. She had learned the sign language when she served as a volunteer in the deaf and mute (聋哑) school. Then she showed the woman the direction and left her email address to them in case they needed her help later.
She received an email from that man the next day. Kazrim was his name. Galaxy replied his mail sincerely. They both started chatting online soon after and began seeing each other. Although they only communicated with the sign language, it never bothered her.
Galaxy was fond of him gradually. Obviously, Kazrim was the same too. He presented Galaxy with a bunch of sunflowers and asked her sincerely. “Are you willing to be my girlfriend?”
Galaxy was pleasantly surprised. She requested him to give her some time to persuade her parents.
As she had expected, her parents were very angry after they had learned of their love story. Galaxy explained, “Kazrim is an excellent and a very optimistic person. He has a very
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positive attitude towards life and work. He cares for others always. He is 100% better than the normal. Moreover, the mute is still a human. He should possess a perfect and wonderful love.”
Her parents asked to see him, then. The very worried Galaxy took Kazrim home a few days later. When they were on the train, Kazrim told her, “I’m going to tell your parents that I’ll be looking after you well with all my life!” Galaxy was deeply moved.
As soon as they had entered the house, Galaxy introduced him to her parents. She said, “This is Kazrim.” Just right after her speech, an unbelievable thing happened. Kazrim threw the gift away and held her in his arms tightly.
He said, “YOU CAN TALK?” It was the same question that Galaxy wanted to ask, too. The four people were shocked all of a sudden. As a matter of fact, Kazrim always believed that Galaxy was a mute and he still fell in love with her deeply. 31. How did Galaxy and Kazrim get to know each other?
A. They met each other by chance. B. They were introduced to each other. C. They once studied at the same university. D. They both served in a deaf and mute school.
32. How did Galaxy probably communicate with Kazrim before she took him home?
A. Writing words on paper. B. Using the sign language. C. Judging from his expression. D. Speaking her native language. 33. What did Galaxy expect her parents to do?
A. To have a talk with Kazrim. B. To prepare for her marriage. C. To treat Kazrim as a normal man. D. To accept Kazrim as her boyfriend.
34. What can we learn about the two young people from the passage?
A. They fell in love at the first sight. B. They cheated each other to win love. C. They mistook each other for being mutes. D. They ignored the anger of Galaxy’s parents.
B
I’ve spent over a year in India, and in those 365 plus days, I’ve learned a lot about getting around Indian cities. My biggest lessons have been learned through being cheated, particularly by taxi and rickshaw (人力车) drivers, but that doesn’t mean those are bad ways to travel, as long as you know what you’re doing. Below are the best ways to get around the city of Delhi, India, and
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tips for how to keep from being the victim of scams (欺骗).
Taking taxis is a great way to get around the city of Delhi and chances are, if you arrive in Delhi by plane, as soon as you make it through customs, you’ll be swarmed by Indian taxi drivers. At the Delhi airport, be sure to arrange for a taxi to your hotel at one of the two Delhi Traffic Police Taxi Booths. One is inside the airport, and one is outside. The key is to make sure to go to a booth run by the police, rather than by independent taxi drivers.
Rickshaws are one of my favorite ways to get around Indian cities, partly because it’s how the locals often travel. Auto-rickshaws are more common, but bicycle rickshaws are still used in Old Delhi. If you do have a chance to take a bicycle rickshaw, you should do it at least once for a unique experience that should only set you back about 15 rupees. Auto-rickshaw rates around Delhi range between 30 and 80 rupees, depending on distance.
If you really want to travel around Delhi like the locals, take a public bus. Indian buses become very crowded and most do not have air conditioning. They are, however, very cheap. A bus trip won’t set you back any more than 15 rupees, as long as you stay within the city limits. Since Indian buses get so crowded, try to board the bus at the start of the route so you can get a seat.
The train is a great way to get around within the city of Delhi. Fares are reasonable, between six and 22 rupees. All departure announcements are in both Hindi and English, and tokens can be purchased for between six and 22 rupees.
35. What is the author trying to do through this text?
A. Expect us to travel around Delhi. B. Show his/her experiences in Delhi. C. Give some advice of traveling in Delhi. D. Explain the difficulties of traveling in Delhi.
36. What should you do to avoid being cheated when taking a taxi at the Delhi airport?
A. Go to a police-run booth.
B. Go out of the airport.
C. Show your ticket to the driver. D. Pay more to the drivers to keep safe. 37. The author suggests taking a rickshaw in order to ______.
A. save some money
B. gain some unique experience D. help the local rickshaw drivers
C. enjoy the comfortable trip A. Car rentals in Delhi B. Food and drink in Delhi C. Weather conditions in Delhi
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38. Which may be the topic that follows?
D. Hotel recommendations in Delhi
C
An alcohol breath test (ABT) is often used by the police to find out whether a person is drunk while driving. In the United States, the legal blood alcohol limit is 0.08% for people aged 21 years or older, while people under 21 are not allowed to drive a car with any level of alcohol in their body. A “positive” test result, a result over the legal limit, allows the police to arrest the driver. However, many people who tested positive on the test have claimed that they only drank a “non-alcoholic” energy drink. Can one of these energy drinks really cause someone to test positive on an ABT? Researchers in Missouri set up an experiment to find out.
First, the amount of alcohol in 27 different popular energy drinks was measured. All but one had an alcohol level greater than 0.005%. In nine of the 27 drinks, the alcohol level was at least 0.096%.The scientists then investigated the possibility that these small levels of alcohol could be discovered by an ABT. They asked test subjects to drink a full can or bottle of an energy drink and then gave each subject an ABT one minute and 15 minutes after the drink was finished.
For 11 of the 27energy drinks, the ABT did find the presence of alcohol if the test was given within one minute after the drink was taken. However, alcohol could not be discovered for any of the drinks if the test was given 15 minutes after the drink was consumed. This shows that when the test is taken plays an important role in the test result. The sooner the test is conducted after the consumption of these drinks, the more likely a positive alcohol reading will be obtained. 39. What is the legal alcohol level for a 20-year-old driver in the US?
A. 0.000%.
B. 0.005%.
C. 0.080%.
D. 0.096%.
40. What is the purpose of the Missouri experiment?
A. To warn people of the dangers of drinking energy drinks. B. To introduce a new method of calculating blood alcohol levels. C. To discover the relation between energy drinks and ABT test results. D. To change the current legal alcohol limit for drivers in the United States. 41. The underlined word “subjects” in Paragraph 2 refers to_____.
A. the things that are being discussed B. areas of knowledge studied in school C. the person in an experiment
D. the people who belong to a country
42. Which of the following affects the ABT test result most for energy drink consumers?
A. The age of the person who takes the test. B. The place where the test is given. C. The equipment that the test uses.
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D. The time when the test is taken.
D
An American educational expert, Frederick M. Hess, says that a long summer vacation doesn’t make sense in today’s world.
This summer, 50 million kids will spend much time talking online, watching TV, playing video games and asking older brothers or sisters to take them to the supermarket. They will also be putting their academic futures at risk.
During much of the 20th century, many Americans worked in factories that did not need a college degree but still offered a high salary. Also, in the 19th century, there was no air condition. And poor hygiene (卫生) meant that crowded schools had health risks.
Things have changed. For today’s students, academic skills are key to future success. Many countries don’t give kids an American-style summer vacation. They offer no more than seven consecutive (连续的) weeks of vacation. Most American school districts offer up to 13 weeks. To compete in global marketplace, Americans must be prepared to go up against international competitors.
Summer vacation also causes challenges for today’s families. In the 1960s, more than 60% of families had a stay-at-home mum. Now, two-thirds of American children live families where every adult works. For these families, summer vacation can be more burden than break. Someone must watch the kids.
But the biggest problem may be how summer vacation hurts academic achievement. Scientist have found that disadvantaged students lose important ground in the summertime.
A school year can allow time-limited teachers to conduct richer and more imaginative lessons. Schools would have more time for sports, languages, music and the arts. 43. Before the 20th century, a long summer vacation might ______.
A. reduce income for Americans B. reduce health risks for students C. cause career failure for Americans D. cause loss in global market for America
44. How long does an American-style summer vacation last？
A. No more than two months. C. As long as three months.
B. Less than three months. D. As long as four months.
45. According to the text, who will benefit from a long school year?
A. American students, teachers and parents. B. American students, parents and shop owners.
C. American students, parents and international competitors. D. American students, teachers and international competitors. 46. How many reasons did the writer give to support his/her opinion?
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A. One. B. Two. C. Three.
E
D. Four.
To get a chocolate out of a box requires a lot of unpacking: the box has to be taken out of the paper bag in which it arrived, the cellophane (玻璃纸) wrapper has to be torn off, the lid opened and the paper removed, the chocolate itself then has to be unwrapped from its own piece of paper. But this overuse of wrapping is not limited to luxuries. It is now becoming increasingly difficult to buy anything that is not done up in beautiful wrapping.
The package itself is of no interest to the shopper, who usually throws it away immediately. Useless wrapping accounts for much of the refuse put out by the average London house-hold each week. So why is it done? Some of it, like the cellophane on meat, is necessary, but most of the rest is simply competitive selling. This is absurd. Packaging is using up valuable energy and resources and polluting the environment.
Recycling is already happening with milk bottles which are returned to the dairies (牛奶场）, washed out, and refilled. But both glass and paper are being threatened by the growing use of plastic. More dairies are experimenting with plastic bottles.
The trouble with plastic is that it does not rot. Some environmentalists argue that the only solution to the problem of ever increasing plastic containers is to throw away plastic altogether in the shops, a suggestion unacceptable to many producers who say there is no alternative (替代品) to their handy plastic packs.
It is evident that more research is needed into the recovery and re-use of various materials and into the cost of collecting and recycling containers rather than producing new ones. Unnecessary packaging, intended to be used just once, and to make things look better so more people will buy them, is clearly becoming increasingly absurd. But it is not so much a question of throwing away packaging as using it wisely. What is needed now is a more advanced approach to using scarce resources for what is, after all, a relatively unimportant function.
47. The underlined part “this overuse of wrapping is not limited to luxuries” in Paragraph l means ______.
A. more wrapping is needed for ordinary products B. the wrapping used for luxury products is unnecessary C. more wrapping is used for luxuries than for ordinary products D. too much wrapping is used for both luxury and ordinary products 48. Why is packaging important to producers?
A. It is easy to use it again.
B. Packaged things will not go rotten. C. They want to attract more shoppers.
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D. Shoppers are all interested in beautiful packaging. 49. According to the passage, dairies are ______.
A. reusing their paper containers B. giving up the use of glass bottles C. increasing the use of plastic bottles D. experimenting with the use of paper bottles 50. Some environmentalists think that ______.
A. too much plastic is wasted
B. shops should stop using plastic containers C. no alternative can be found to plastic packaging D. plastic packaging should be made more convenient
第二节 根据短文内容，从短文后的七个选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）
A: Have you ever read the book Who Moved My Cheese? B: 51
A: What a pity! It’s a wonderful book, you know.
B: Well, I’ve been wanting to read it for a long time, but I can’t get one. 52 A: 53 If you like, I’ll lend it to you. B: 54 By the way, when can I get it?
A: 55 Will you please come to my house after school? B: OK, I’ll go as soon as school is over.
A. I’m afraid I haven’t. B. That’s very kind of you. C. I haven’t had it with me. D. You really should read it. E. I forgot where I had put it. F. Well, I have a copy of my own. G. The library has only three and they are all out.
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第Ⅱ卷（非选择题 共60分）
注意事项：
请用0.5毫米黑色墨水签字笔在答题卡上作答，不能答在试卷上。
第三部分 写作（共三节，满分60分）
第一节 阅读表达（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）
阅读下面短文并回答问题，然后将答案写到答题卡相应的位置上（请注意词数要求）。 Brazil has become one of the developing world’s great successes at reducing population growth — but more by accident than design. While countries such as India have made joint efforts to reduce birth rates, Brazil has had better result without really trying, says George Martine at Harvard.
Brazil’s population growth rate has dropped from 2.99% a year between 1951 and 1960 to 1.93% a year between 1981 and 1990, and Brazilian women now have only 2.7 children on average. Martine says this figure may have fallen still further since 1990, an achievement that makes it the envy of many other Third World countries.
Martine puts it down to among other things, soap operas and installment (分期付款) plans introduced in the 1970s. Both played an important, although indirect, role in lowering the birth rate. Brazil is one of the world’s biggest producers of soap operas. Globo, Brazil’s most popular television network, shows three hours of soaps six nights a week, while three others show at least one hour a night. Most soaps are based on wealthy characters living the high life in big cities.
“Although they have never really tried to work in a message towards the problems of reproduction (生育), they describe middle and upper class values: not many children, different attitudes towards sex, women working,” says Martine. “They sent this image to all parts of Brazil and made people conscious of other patterns of behavior and other values, which were put into a very attractive package.”
Meanwhile, the installment plans tried to encourage the poor to become consumers (消费者). “This led to an enormous change in consumption patterns and consumption was incompatible (不相容的) with unlimited reproduction,” says Martine. 56. What is the passage mainly about? (within 8 words)
__________________________________________________________
57. What’s Brazil’s population growth rate between 1981 and 1990? (within 4 words)
__________________________________________________________
58. What are the two main factors in helping Brazil lower its birthrate? (within 6 words)
__________________________________________________________
59. How long does the most popular television network in Brazil show soap operas every week? (within 2 words)
__________________________________________________________ 60. What changes have soap operas brought to Brazilians? (within 8 words)
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__________________________________________________________ 第二节 短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Dear Editor,
I used to be a happy little girl and now I’m shy and say a few words.
When I was eleven, I lost one of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one. No one knows about it except two of my friend. However, I found it hard to face them because they know my secret. When I speak at them, they often stare at my mouth, what makes me feel uneasy. I am afraid of make new friends as I think they will laugh at me. Sometime I even want to kill me indeed. What should I do?
Li Hua
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第三节 书面表达（满分35分）
假设你是李华，你的父母总是喜欢替你包办一切，你觉得很苦恼。请你根据以下提示给某英语报社编辑写一封信。
1. 简述现象（两种）； 2. 分析弊端（两个方面）； 3. 你的观点或建议。 注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：独立性independence
Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. __________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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资阳市高中2011级第一次诊断性考试
英语答案及评分意见
第一部分
1-5 BCABC 11-15 DDBCB 第二部分
31-35 ABDCC
36-40 ABAAC
41-45 CDBCA
46-50 DDCCB（每小题2分）
6-10 ACBDD（每小题1分） 16-20 ABBAD
21-25 ACDAC
26-30 CBACA（每小题1.5分）
51-55 AGFBC（每小题2分） 第三部分
第一节（每小题2分） 一、参考答案
56. Brazil has successfully reduced its population growth. 57. 1.93% a year.
58. Soap operas and installment plans. 59. 18 hours.
60. They have changed people’s values and behaviors. / They have gradually changed people’s way of life.
二、评分意见
1. 意思相符，语法、结构正确，拼写无误，得2分。
2. 每题按5个档次给分，依次为0分、0.5分、1分、1.5分和2分。
3. 语法与拼写错误，错误1到2个，扣0.5分，3个及3个以上扣1分；相同错误按1个计算。大小写和标点出错原则上不扣分。
4. 超出字数扣0.5分。 第二节（每小题1.5分） 一、参考答案
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二、评分意见
1. 未标注符号或符号标注不规范一律不给分。
2. 答题位置（需修改的词下方或需添加位置的下方）不对（如答在上方或相距甚远的位置）一律不给分。
第三节 一、评分原则
1. 本题总分为35分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于100的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 二、语言错误的界定
1. 考生必须以完整的主谓结构表达出要点，如有严重错误视为半个要点。
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2. 考生如果以主从句表达要点，主句主谓结构正确，从句主谓结构有严重错误，视为全点。
3. 大小写和标点错误，酌情扣1-2分。 4. 重复语言错误只扣1分。
5. 书写、卷面较差，影响判卷，扣1-2分。 6. 词数少于100词扣2分；
7. 下列情况不给分：所写内容与试题要点无关；错误已经影响意义的表达；只写出零星的相关词汇而无主谓结构。
三、内容要点 1. 两种现象； 2. 两个弊端； 3. 你的观点或建议。 四、各档次给分范围和要求 第五档（29~35分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 第四档（22~28分）
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完成了试题规定的任务。
虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档（15~21分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 第二档（8~14分）
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 第一档（1~7分）
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未完成试题规定的任务。
明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 信息未能传达给读者。 0分
未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
五、说明
1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达。 2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 六、One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. They choose the school and subjects for me. Sometimes even clothing and daily timetables have to be decided by them.
In my opinion, deciding everything for children does not help them but harm them in many ways. Firstly, it will make children lack independence, which is unfavorable to their development in the long run. Secondly, in many cases parents’ decisions go against children’s personal ideas and interests, which will make children form resistance and naturally influence their growth.
I do believe to grow to be independent is a natural way for everybody. Parents should give us chances to make our own decisions. They may help us make choices instead of replacing us to make choices.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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