(大学试卷)英语写作二A卷答案

Part I. Summary Writing (20 %): Main points

1． The Hawthorne Effect phenomenon was first noted in an experiment conducted before World

War II at the Hawthorne plant of Western Electric. 2． Productivity increased significantly not because incentives were added but because attention

was given to workers. 3． The Hawthorne Effect is the contamination of the experiment because the subjects try to

achieve whatever result the experimenters desire.

Part II.Essay Appreciation (35%)

1—4 d c a b

5 a. the inconvenience of going out, b. the temptations of the theatre, c. the behavior of some patrons 6. the jammed parking lot endless ticket line crowded theater sticky floor

7. the theater offers tempting snacks that I really don’t need 8. theater is like a Seven-Eleven with seats Chocolate bars Milk Duds

9. Little kids race up and down the aisles;

Teenagers try to impress their friends by talking back to the screen, whistling, and making what they consider to be hilarious noises; People of all ages create distractions.

10. I was tired of the problems involved in getting to the theater, resisting unhealthy snacks, and dealing with the patrons. The next day, I arranged to have premium movie channels installed as part of my cable TV service, and I also got a membership at my local video store. I may now see movies a bit later than other people, but I’ll be more relaxed watching box office hits in the comfort of my own living room.

Part III.Writing (45%)

英文写作成绩的判定主要从以下三个方面：

内容（Content）；（focus on ideas）

语言（Language）；（focus on verb tenses, diction, spelling） 写作技巧（Skills）；（Writing skills） 1. 扣分显示也主要表现在以下四个方面：

语言 （L）：35% 写作技巧（S）：40% 内容 （C）：25 % 2. 批阅统一标识：

错误一律用线标出，较严重的语言错误用波浪线标出，每条波浪线表示扣1分；一般性

的语言错误用直线标出，每条直线表示扣0.5分。