以Three Years’ School Life 为题写一篇短文,回顾你的初中生活。要求...
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How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. On of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。要求回顾初中三年的生活。主要用一般过去时和第一人称。主意写作中连词的合理运用。
【亮点说明】这篇短文层次清晰，运用了较高级的句式。如：How time flies!，I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, Since then, she has kept helping me. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.等。大量连词和短语的运用使文章更紧凑，更有逻辑性，如：No matter how ，As soon as Little by littlle等
