王红想利用高考结束到大学入学前这段时间打工,下面是她的一份求职...
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时间：2024-10-29 02:34
Dear manager ,
I hope to apply for a job in your company during this summer vacation. Please allow me to introduce myself.
My name is Wang Hong, female. I was born in Xintai, Shandong Province, on November, 22 nd , 1996. I’ve just graduated from Xintai No.2 Middle School. Since it will be over two months before I go to university, I want to find a part-time job and I hope to be a travel guide in your company. I enjoy working with people together. I am young, strong and helpful. I can speak English pretty well. I’m very interested in traveling and especially know many beautiful places in Taian quite well. I once worked as a tourist guide for a month and was highly praised for my good service. I’m sure I am qualified for the job.
If you hire me, please call me at 0538—72254 or write to me at this address: 36 Culture Road, Xintai, Shandong Province and the post code is 271200.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hong
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